Having talked to Alan previously, I quickly cut a few bits from the previous animatic and refined the timing a little. I feel what I have now is more concise; the narrative is less cluttered.
I do however still need to figure out the movement of the characters - and the 'tick' previously mentioned; this should give a better sense of characterisation and a more colourful narrative by having the character inside the stomach adopt the same tick.
But, I'd be happy to begin animating based on this animatic when some of the finer details of the design are sorted out!
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